Where Does Your Writer’s Voice Come From?

Someone recently asked me to read the first chapter of a novel written by a young man who has been diagnosed with Asperger syndrome (an autism spectrum disorder). As I read through the pages, I kept thinking about “voice.” This writer was obviously quite talented, had a good grasp of the language, but had a tendency to include the entire back story of each of the characters, both minor and major. I am sure that the attention to minute, and seemingly irrelevant information was due to the writer’s autism, but I had to wonder about how to take out that detail without changing the voice of the writer.

Writer’s voice, according to Wikipedia, is the term used to describe the writing style of an author. Most of the pundits out there maintain that voice is a critical element of writing. But how, exactly do we find our “voice?” And, maybe even more importantly, does our voice change depending on what we are writing?

Some say to write as if you are talking to your family and friends, but is that the voice you want to use when writing a non-fiction, technical article? Voice is not something you can learn from a book, a blog, or a self-help writer’s class. It is not something that you can copy from someone else; but it is something you can find. But, where?

Well, that’s a great question. Our voice, as writers, is within ourselves. Not the self we present to the world through the screens of “this is what is expected of me, or this is how I want to be perceived,” but our real, true selves. OK. So, how do we peel away the external selves to find this inner self?

The voice of the author is what drives the story. The personality, the thoughts, the convictions of the writer will come out in the development of the written work. We all find our voices differently, and we all use them differently. The key here is to not attempt to write the way we think someone else wants us to write, but to write the way we truly feel. Not everyone will agree with our voice, but we can’t please everyone so we need to stop trying.

The young writer I referred to at the beginning of this post has a voice, not one that I would want to emulate, but certainly not one I would want to squash with a red editor’s pencil, either.

How do you find your voice?

Stuck? Bogged Down? Can’t Get Started?

One of my faithful readers recently told me she had “…shut down, in terms of my writing…” She was in a blue funk, thinking, “Nobody wants to read anything I write so why do it?” Now, she has a short story tumbling around in her head, but can’t seem to get it started. She’s stuck, bogged down, and can’t get started.

That is someplace we, as writers, have all been, isn’t it? It’s easy to get there, but not so easy to come back to where we need to be. So, let’s help her out. What do you do to pull yourself up by the bootstraps and start writing again after spending a few weeks wondering, “Why bother?”

I’ll start – - -

When I took a creative writing class in college, my instructor had us do a free-writing exercise using this keyword: Gossamer. I started out writing about a butterfly, and somehow ended up with a fun story about two girls taking a joy read in a jeep covered in mud. But that is what free-writing is all about, isn’t it?

The point is, whenever I get stuck now I just start thinking about gossamer and that gets me going. Any free-writing exercise will do that — just start writing down whatever comes to mind, as you get into the act of writing, the ideas will start to coalesce into something that makes sense. You can delete the free-writing part at the top of the story when you proofread the first time.

OK, now how about the rest of you? What do you do to get yourself started after spending time thinking that there’s no point, so why bother?

Can You Write Without a Computer?

Welcome to The Center for Writing Excellence’s first post of 2012!

This morning when I opened my email, I found this link: 12 Writers Who Still Refuse to Use Computers was published on the AOC (Accredited Online Colleges) Website.

It is a very interesting article highlighting 12 authors who prefer pen and paper when drafting their work. Some of them do eventually turn to the computer for finalizing the manuscript, but they all insist that starting out with pen in hand helps them be more creative, more involved with their writing, and more productive.

And in at least one instance, much more lucrative. J.K. Rowling, author of the wildly popular Harry Potter series, recently auctgioned a handwritten, illustrated copy of her story, The Tales of Beetle the Bard, for $4 million. Benefits went to a children’s charity. Rowling prefers to write with a black pen and actually jotted down the names of the Hogwarts houses on the back of an airline ‘sick’ bag.

Personally, my handwriting is so bad after so many years using the keyboard that I avoid writing anything by hand if I can. However, one of the authors in the article, Tess Gerritsen, says she likes that nobody can read her handwriting because she believes her first drafts are terrible and unreadable.

Click on the link above and go read the article, then come back here and let me know if you write with paper and pen first, or do you start and end on the computer.

Happy Writing!

Happy Holidays Everyone!

Christmas is one week from today, and I want to wish Happy Holidays to all my followers, whether you celebrate Christmas, Hanukkah, Kwanzaa, Samhain, or any other holiday. My wish for you this season is health, happiness, and excellent writing!

I have received many ecards over the years, some funny, some nostalgic, and some just down right memorable. My all-time favorite, however is the one with the Drifters singing “White Christmas.” The video has a delightful cartoon reindeer chorus backing up Santa. Here is the link on YouTube: White Christmas.

Enjoy! I’ll be back after the holidays.

I’m a Writer, not a Speaker!

I attended a meeting last night of the Scottsdale Society of Women Writers. The group is a very dynamic mix of women writers, both published and not published and I enjoy this group whenever I can, which is not enough. Last night’s speaker, Gilat Ben-Dor, brought up a point that I think needs exploring. As writers we are always wanting to get our work out in front of the public, that’s why we write. Gilat contends that one way to stand out is to become a speaker – and she is not talking about reading a few paragraphs at a book signing. She means public speaking on topics we are familiar with. Topics we can pull from our writing or relate back to our writing. And, oh by the way, having our books on the table in the back of the room so we can sell them.

To some, the idea of standing in front of a crowded room with all eyes focused on you is a bit scary, or even terrifying. But think about it, wouldn’t it be nice to have people know they can come to you, as the expert on your topic? If you speak and write about it, you must know something about it! Someone mentioned to me last night that nobody really wants to read your memoirs unless you are famous. So, become famous! Start speaking about your writing.

OK, Janie, some of you are saying, I write fiction. How do I write about that without just reading chapters from my book? Well, as Gilat pointed out to us so clearly, does your protagonist solve problems? You can talk about problem-solving skills. Do your characters relate to each other in unique ways? You can talk about relationships. And you can tie it all in to the books on the table in the back of the room.

The end result should be more exposure for you, and more sales for your books, both fiction and non-fiction. For more information on Gilat, visit her website at GilatMedia.com

Dear Santa . . .

I’ve been a good writer this year. I tried to post a blog entry at least once a week, and succeeded most of the time. I ran the writer’s contest every other month and met some wonderful writers as a result. I published the Fiction in Five Anthology to feature some of those writers. I published my book on Creating and Delivering an online class – and even sold several copies! I managed to get a newsletter out every month since February because of the contributions of more of those wonderful writers. And then there is the time and effort I put in to tweet, chat, link, and Facebook about all of the above . . . .

Since I have been a good writer this year, I hope you can review my Christmas wish list and see if you can fill my stocking with some of these great writer’s tools.

  • Time to Write: I promise I will use it diligently for blogging, article writing, more books, and curriculum projects.
  • A Smart Phone: I really don’t want one of these, but my kids seem to think I am so far behind the technology curve because I don’t have one that I should get one just to keep them happy.
  • My Own Pens: This might seem odd, considering I do all my writing with the computer, but I want to open the desk drawer and find a pen when I need one. I fill the drawer all the time, but the pens disappear faster than milk and cookies on Christmas Eve.
  • More Writing Contests: by this I mean quick contests that don’t cost a lot that I can enter monthly or so to help practice my writing skills and get feedback.
  • An Amazon Kindle Gift Card: Well, I did get one of these for my birthday last week, but another one would be great – I love my Kindle for easy reading without lugging books everywhere with me.
  • More Wonderful Writer Friends: The writer friends I have made all over the world through the newsletter, this blog, and the Fiction in Five contest are wonderful already – who wouldn’t want more of that?

Thanks, Santa, I will leave milk and cookies out for you on Christmas Eve.

Readers: what is on your wish list this year?

It was 1966…. and it is Today

On November 23, 1966, I was in high school (stop doing the math —- it was a very long time ago!) I was on the staff of my high school newspaper, the Kodiak, at Billings West High School, in Billings, Montana. (that’s me, on the bottom right, sitting, with the long hair) One of the very first writing assignments I had was to write an open letter to the soldier in Viet Nam. I found my old scrapbook this morning – falling apart and pages yellowed at the edges. Here is that letter, written all those years ago. Change the scenery from the jungle to the desert, and it can be to our troops in Afganistan and Iraq now:

Dear fathers, sons, brothers, and sweethearts [adding in the mothers, daughters, and sisters for 2011]: As I sit down to a bountiful Thanksgiving dinner, I think of you in the hot, sticky rice paddies [desert]. I hear my father giving the traditional Thanksgiving prayer while the commander of the platoon shouts orders to you. the turkey is passed, and my mind’s eye reflects the image of you weeping over the body of one of your buddies. I spoon gravy on my potatoes and you brush insects off your K-rations. As the pumpkin pie is cut, I imagine the sounds of bullets and mortar fire showering upon hundreds of innocent people. And finally, when the dishes are cleared, I see you marching proudly through the mud [sand] and insects toward home, and I utter a silent prayer for you, the soldier in Viet Nam [Afganistan and Iraq] on this Thanksgiving Day.

My other publication in that issue of the Kodiak was this Thanksgiving poem:

Thanksgiving is:
The first snow
Mashed potatoes and gravy
Prayer
School vacation
Company
The good silverware
Having Aunt Mabel kiss you
Turkey in the cafeteria
Brown and orange
Pilgrims
Muskets and brass buckles
Indians
Corn
Mayflower
Pumpkin pie with whipped cream
Peace
Brotherhood
Red, yellow, orange, and brown leaves
Cranberries
AND Finally:
30 days till Christmas!

Happy Thanksgiving all of you from 1966 and today!

Reviewing…Editing…Revising

I finished the first draft of my new book, “Create and Deliver Your Own Online Course” about a week ago and let it sit while I started working on some other writing projects. This morning I got it out, thinking I would do a quick run-through before sending it off to Lulu for self-publishing. It was only after I started reading through it that I realized it was a good thing I let it sit for a week.

I started reading and thought, “Wow, who wrote this?? Doesn’t she know anything about sentence structure, second person  vs. third person, or even content alignment?”

As I reviewed the text, several of my previous blog posts started coming back to haunt me. Who do I think  I am, writing about writing when I can’t even write myself? Ha! To be honest, the draft wasn’t that bad, but it certainly was not publish-ready! There are reasons why we always talk about reviewing…editing…revising! Letting this content sit and ‘cook’ for a few days was a good thing. This is a non-ficiton book and it is full of advise, facts, and information that needs to be accurate as well as understandable to the reader.  As I am reading through it now I am trying to read it from someone else’s viewpoint – which makes editing it much easier.

I did something similar with a short story I wrote for a contest last week. It was a really short one (600 words) so I dashed it off, then put it away. In the middle of the night I woke up with a whole different ending swirling around in my head! I had to get up and get it out of my head so I could go back to sleep. <sigh> Sometimes our writing projects just take over, don’t they?

Have you got any tricks for reviewing…editing…revising? I would love to hear them!

…and the beat goes on..La de da de de, la de da de da

Remember that old song? I know, I am really aging myself here, but I found myself humming it this morning as I started unpacking some boxes on our new site. I remember Sonny and Cher singing that song way back when – - – and their message is still true  today. We have almost completed our move, but the details are getting a bit overwhelming. Moving an Internet site and all its associated pages, blogs, shopping carts, etc. is like moving out of a house you have lived in forever! It has only been two years, but we keep finding little things here and there – forgotten bits and bytes of data, pages we haven’t cleaned up in awhile – - but the beat goes on! Our deadline to have everything off the old site is in a couple days. We will make it, maybe just under the wire, but we will make it.

In the meantime, the beat goes on . . . and we are contemplating a celebration for our second anniversary- coming up at the end of November. One idea is a virtual party on Facebook – or maybe even at our new digs on a special blog page. You post pics of what you will bring (food, music, drink, etc.) and we will set a time for everyone to show up and have a chat. We could have door prizes or other fun give-aways. What do you think? How would you like to celebrate our new site, and our anniversary?

OK, I’m off to unpack some more moving boxes – - -

We’re Moving!

All this week and probably most of next week, the Institute for Instructional Excellence (i4IE) is moving. I4IE is the parent company for the Center for Writing Excellence (C4WE), the Center for Teaching Excellence, (C4TE) and the Center for Excellent Living (C4EL). We are packing up our websites, our blogs, and all our pages and moving them all over from HostGator and WordPress.com to BlueHost and WordPress.Org. Don’t ask me for the technical specifics, I leave those details up to my very capable business partner, Sheri Schmeckpeper.

What I do know is with our new locations we will have more control over our pages, sites, and offerings. Our addresses will be simpler, and we will make the transition as smooth as possible for all of you. If you want to check our new digs as we are building the site, you can see them here: Institute for Instructional Excellence. Be aware that it is a construction zone so you might want to wear hard hats and steel-toed boots!

There will be forwarding links from our old to new sites for at least a year, and some of the links will remain the same. I have been using a new email address for about a month now: janiewrites1@gmail.com. It goes with this website address: janiewrites.com.

There will be more information on the move in this area as we make the changes. The newsletter, which comes out on the first Monday of every month will also have more information as well. November is going to be an exciting time for the Institute for Instructional Excellence as it is our anniversary month. Two years ago Sheri and I launched I4IE and its respective Centers. We are planning some fun things to celebrate our Second Anniversary! Stay tuned! and Happy Writing!